In process writing, revision is the most important stage. Here, your message and your language becomes clearer. However, first we need someone to read our essay and give us advice. We need to know if our message is clear or not.

  We don't need advice about grammar so much. An unclear essay with correct grammar is still unclear.  Also, you will find that as you change your essay to make your message clearer, you will see changes that need to be made in grammar. Focusing like this is like magic! Finally, learning how to be critical about other people's writng helps you to learn how to see your own writing more objectively.

  Today, we will work in pairs and give our parnter advice about their essay. Take your time and try to give your partner some good suggestions!
After that go to criterion and rewrite your essay. Let's get a better score this time!

   You can download the sheet here.