Matthew
Walsh's EFL ESL website
10/12 (A), 10/19 (B)
Rewrite
of 'Money and Success' and challenge to try an 'introduction into a
thesis'.
1) Go to 'quizlab'
and do the quiz 'Intro into thesis'. Can you remember the types of
introductions? Look here to remember.
Note:
The 'classwords' are:
class1writing
class2writing.....
The passwords are:
101,102,103....
201,202,203....
Enter 'Quizlab' >>>>
2) Go to
'Criterion', look at your partner's essay and give them some advice.
(Get this sheet from Mr. Walsh)
Enter 'Criterion'
>>>> 
3) Rewrite
'Money and Success' using the advice, and try to add on an
'introduction to a thesis.' Did your score go up? Are you happy
with your essay?