Matthew Walsh's EFL ESL website

Writing Summer Homework Assignment 2

Finish the 1st draft of your essay, and post it on the 'Student BBS' of Mr. Walsh's EFL ESL website. After that, read another student's essay, and give them a helpful comment.

1) Put your first draft of “Money and Success” in the 'Writing' Forum of the BBS as a 'New Topic'.

2) Don't forget to try to write an 'introduction' that leads into the thesis or topic sentence’

3) At the bottom, write your name from the 'Secret Journal'.

4) Read another student's 1st draft on the BBS.

5) Give them 2 comments as an 'Add Reply'
     1: I like ~.   
     2: I think you should write more about ~.
        *Note:  Be nice, but constructive.

6) Sign your reply with your'Secret Journal' name.

7) If all the drafts already have a reply, look again in a few days.