EFL ESL website
Summer Homework Assignment 2
Finish the 1st
draft of your essay, and post it on the 'Student BBS' of Mr. Walsh's
EFL ESL website. After that, read another student's essay, and give
them a helpful comment.
1) Put your first draft of gMoney and Successh in the 'Writing' Forum of the BBS as a 'New Topic'.
2) Don't forget to try to write an 'introduction' that leads into
the thesis or topic sentencef
3) At the bottom, write your name from the 'Secret Journal'.
4) Read another student's 1st
draft on the BBS.
5) Give them 2 comments as an 'Add
1: I like ~.
2: I think you should write more about ~.
*Note: Be nice, but constructive.
6) Sign your reply with your'Secret Journal' name.
7) If all the drafts already have a reply, look again in a few days.