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Today, we will rewrite our essays about leaders and members, but
first we need some advice. Do these things:
1) Look at other people's essays to find some more
2) Look at the 'feedback analysis' window of Criterion.
3) Read the text below and take the quiz on Quizlab.
In June, we learned about redundancy and paraphrasing. Do you remember?
You can avoid
using the same word by using:
This helps a text flow nicely by connecting
Take a look at these 3 sentences:
a leader has many advantages. One of them is learning how to make
decisions for yourself. This is an important skill in our personal
lives as well as when we work within groups.
Can you see the connections?
Here they are:
'one of them'
make decisions for yourself' equals
Now, look at these sentences:
Being a leader has many
disadvantages. For example, the responsibilities of being a leader can
be a burden. Decisions you make will effect others.
Thinking about them takes more time than if you were only concerned
The connections here are:
Now go to quizlab and do the quiz
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After you are
finished, read the answers and explantations. (Click here)